April's voice sings me to sleep,
all the trees are singing, and the breeze,
in my ears.
they say their leaves have never felt so green,
and I'm so green, and falling
asleep on springtime.
The sun feels so warm
now, and I sigh. pretend it never burned me.
sigh for summer air,
and my eyes. fall asleep
to the lightness of evening
remembering when
you were wide awake and by my side
Do you love me more?
now that you can't see me,
as I fall asleep
and listen to the air.
I was lost in the season,
need to be inspired,
inspired by the sea again.
I need to be inspired
and take my pen
you weren't there, but you,
how could I hav
Nightmare: Romance, etc. by yeatsgrave, literature
Literature
Nightmare: Romance, etc.
Nightmare: Romance Movie Screen Violence
Dream girls feel
sidewalk rage
in short skirts tall boots and sharp under-wires
holding up
digging in
deep
purses for lipstick
pepper spray and loose tobacco in fingernails
yellowed
smiles
just like those old magazine clippings kept
under the bed from fingers
exploring
possessing caressing their long hair
the breeze those branches
brushing
gently
at car windowpanes
high-speeds chasing a breeze
that winds through corners and smiles
back
she's running but fades like a movie reel burning
and melting
away
with each step through the snow
a mountainous figure
looms
in
I. Midsummer
They say God's heartbeat
rolls
as his chest hits the sky
and the warmth of his skin
meets with cold clouds like metal springs
poked through a mattress
Raging sparks form like defibrillator pads
pressed to his bosom
as the wind yells
clear!
God comes to life
with many great booms and pops
and the danger of fire
huffing frantic
after a deep grey comatose
sinking
silent
The sky brings him to life
After the electrodes
and the clouds like fluffy gauze
have been removed and tossed aside
Nurse Wind
wheels God's bed away
A warm glow in the sky once again:
His heart burns brightly.
II.
GUT*
My soul turns into a tree,
And an animal, and a cloud bank.
Then changed and odd it comes home
And asks me questions. What should I reply?
-Herman Hesse
I believe all the bones in our bodies hold
tiny constellations;
of stars; of moons; of rocks.
Like this rock
I sit on, that cools
and spins as I spin.
In a field
I dig, and think
the atoms of my fingernails
were once the atoms
in a dinosaurs ribcage;
were once the atoms
melting from a glacier
before the clouds formed.
In this way I have travelled
through time. And they now speculate:
We hold hands and undress
our personalities for the night
Let our secrets go
And the morning wears off slowly
like waking from a dream
until the afternoon
with our coffee and breakfast
where it is business as usual
You on your side of the table
me on mine
The coffee stronger
than the means we use to sweeten it
The fog outside
floats in from the harbour
We step out the door to the street
and pull our coats on tighter
The Marriage Statistic
(A Working Title)
I.
Time,
they say,
is ticking
with every heartbeat
(my ear upon your chest)
(as we live a little)
but I digress
And evening
spreads across the clouds
flamingo and orange
unrest
I wake up one morning to find I am missing an arm.
My other hand pats beneath the covers
but finds no remains.
Outside
I walk the sandbar along the beach
skipping stones, and feeling it when they sink.
Waves dissolve the sand around my feet.
The man of my dreams arrives
and whispers through my soul.*
We kiss
but it turns out he's been made a eunuch.
There is nowhere we can go from here
No future to be made, and
Suddenly
I find no remains.
What is it like in those final seconds
of falling?
I know there is
darkness first, then heaviness
in eyelids, legs, and arms.
The mind comes in and out
like waves
for some time. But in the final seconds
something gets erased.
A fluid in the brain perhaps.
Like the surface barrier on water;
just as your nostrils hit,
and you finally have to exhale,
the rest of the world floats
away for a moment, and then you arrive
changed; submerged.
Falling asleep is like that.
Ether, like water, holding
you in the dark underneath.
Even though we were
never in love
we tried to stretch our jaws
across vast deserts of the earth;
The oases on our tongues
turned to cacti;
The soil against our jeans where we sat,
legs tangled, felt a little too rough
on our bare skin.
The moon shone
hot on our backs, so wed lie
belly up, turning toward each other;
Our arms spread like wings,
ready to escape
the hot hot air.
At night when the stars appeared
against blue sky, cloudless as our thoughts,
wed breathe cold breath
in each others ears
as we slept.
Really, we always kept our eyes closed.
Every morning we had that pain
in our jaw, and parched l
a typical day in the universe by yeatsgrave, literature
Literature
a typical day in the universe
The universe sat down to a cup of tea
one afternoon
in a great big armchair in the sun
and began thinking
The universe thought about its life
and all the people it knew
and within its mind it saw them
slowly taking form
As the universe rose and walked to the window
it imagined its characters
coming to life
At first there was one vague entity
and soon a few, then several
All opaque and shadowy
And the universe mentally followed them
It saw one entity rise from bed
and reach for a tshirt
to throw over its fuzzy outline
and some jeans
The universe watched closely
as the clothing settled
in a particular form
with particula
April's voice sings me to sleep,
all the trees are singing, and the breeze,
in my ears.
they say their leaves have never felt so green,
and I'm so green, and falling
asleep on springtime.
The sun feels so warm
now, and I sigh. pretend it never burned me.
sigh for summer air,
and my eyes. fall asleep
to the lightness of evening
remembering when
you were wide awake and by my side
Do you love me more?
now that you can't see me,
as I fall asleep
and listen to the air.
I was lost in the season,
need to be inspired,
inspired by the sea again.
I need to be inspired
and take my pen
you weren't there, but you,
how could I hav
Nightmare: Romance, etc. by yeatsgrave, literature
Literature
Nightmare: Romance, etc.
Nightmare: Romance Movie Screen Violence
Dream girls feel
sidewalk rage
in short skirts tall boots and sharp under-wires
holding up
digging in
deep
purses for lipstick
pepper spray and loose tobacco in fingernails
yellowed
smiles
just like those old magazine clippings kept
under the bed from fingers
exploring
possessing caressing their long hair
the breeze those branches
brushing
gently
at car windowpanes
high-speeds chasing a breeze
that winds through corners and smiles
back
she's running but fades like a movie reel burning
and melting
away
with each step through the snow
a mountainous figure
looms
in
I. Midsummer
They say God's heartbeat
rolls
as his chest hits the sky
and the warmth of his skin
meets with cold clouds like metal springs
poked through a mattress
Raging sparks form like defibrillator pads
pressed to his bosom
as the wind yells
clear!
God comes to life
with many great booms and pops
and the danger of fire
huffing frantic
after a deep grey comatose
sinking
silent
The sky brings him to life
After the electrodes
and the clouds like fluffy gauze
have been removed and tossed aside
Nurse Wind
wheels God's bed away
A warm glow in the sky once again:
His heart burns brightly.
II.
GUT*
My soul turns into a tree,
And an animal, and a cloud bank.
Then changed and odd it comes home
And asks me questions. What should I reply?
-Herman Hesse
I believe all the bones in our bodies hold
tiny constellations;
of stars; of moons; of rocks.
Like this rock
I sit on, that cools
and spins as I spin.
In a field
I dig, and think
the atoms of my fingernails
were once the atoms
in a dinosaurs ribcage;
were once the atoms
melting from a glacier
before the clouds formed.
In this way I have travelled
through time. And they now speculate:
We hold hands and undress
our personalities for the night
Let our secrets go
And the morning wears off slowly
like waking from a dream
until the afternoon
with our coffee and breakfast
where it is business as usual
You on your side of the table
me on mine
The coffee stronger
than the means we use to sweeten it
The fog outside
floats in from the harbour
We step out the door to the street
and pull our coats on tighter
The Marriage Statistic
(A Working Title)
I.
Time,
they say,
is ticking
with every heartbeat
(my ear upon your chest)
(as we live a little)
but I digress
And evening
spreads across the clouds
flamingo and orange
unrest
I wake up one morning to find I am missing an arm.
My other hand pats beneath the covers
but finds no remains.
Outside
I walk the sandbar along the beach
skipping stones, and feeling it when they sink.
Waves dissolve the sand around my feet.
The man of my dreams arrives
and whispers through my soul.*
We kiss
but it turns out he's been made a eunuch.
There is nowhere we can go from here
No future to be made, and
Suddenly
I find no remains.
What is it like in those final seconds
of falling?
I know there is
darkness first, then heaviness
in eyelids, legs, and arms.
The mind comes in and out
like waves
for some time. But in the final seconds
something gets erased.
A fluid in the brain perhaps.
Like the surface barrier on water;
just as your nostrils hit,
and you finally have to exhale,
the rest of the world floats
away for a moment, and then you arrive
changed; submerged.
Falling asleep is like that.
Ether, like water, holding
you in the dark underneath.
Even though we were
never in love
we tried to stretch our jaws
across vast deserts of the earth;
The oases on our tongues
turned to cacti;
The soil against our jeans where we sat,
legs tangled, felt a little too rough
on our bare skin.
The moon shone
hot on our backs, so wed lie
belly up, turning toward each other;
Our arms spread like wings,
ready to escape
the hot hot air.
At night when the stars appeared
against blue sky, cloudless as our thoughts,
wed breathe cold breath
in each others ears
as we slept.
Really, we always kept our eyes closed.
Every morning we had that pain
in our jaw, and parched l
a typical day in the universe by yeatsgrave, literature
Literature
a typical day in the universe
The universe sat down to a cup of tea
one afternoon
in a great big armchair in the sun
and began thinking
The universe thought about its life
and all the people it knew
and within its mind it saw them
slowly taking form
As the universe rose and walked to the window
it imagined its characters
coming to life
At first there was one vague entity
and soon a few, then several
All opaque and shadowy
And the universe mentally followed them
It saw one entity rise from bed
and reach for a tshirt
to throw over its fuzzy outline
and some jeans
The universe watched closely
as the clothing settled
in a particular form
with particula
Impatience peels from your voice like chocolate shavings
thin, dark and tenuous with an aftertaste of sweetness,
an intoxicating allure that piques my curiosity glands.
It hasnt come yet is the statement, but the subtext,
citrus-sharp, like lemon zest, is unmistakable:
Why? it begs, Where is it?
Lemon-chocolate seduces my senses;
my answer is the crackling sheen of crème brûleé:
itll come. Be patient. I know you sense it,
the warm, creamy subtext waiting beneath your hovering spoon.
Two more days youll live in the saccharine souring
And when I am formulated, sprawling on a pin,
When I am pinned and wriggling on the wall,
Then how should I begin
~ T.S. Eliot, "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock
I am going through the keyless gate
to watch and wait,
to wander here and there among the proud,
among the white and old whose wisdom rots, repressed, untold:
the soporific royals wreathed in leaves of gold.
And to them I shall read aloud from the Book,
read of the sins their lips have took
and upon me they shall look and patiently reflect
I am lost in my own depth, I will say
in a slight, impartial way
(for I lack violets and an antic prin
we leapt from surface to surface, mocking
the stationary ground, chasing prehistoric butterflies
(among other things), and we rubbed our scent
into brilliant foliage so that the world grew with us.
Once,
we opened our eyes to the Inexplicable Truth,
and then we blinked,
and quickly returned
to our naps.
I have moved on
from you
from us
from what we were.
You are
yesterdays news
a page turned
a cigarette smoked.
The essence of you
now ashes in my hand
and baby
here's that blow job
that you always wanted.....
WHOOSH!
Silence Never Was Golden by ScribbledNotes, literature
Literature
Silence Never Was Golden
It just started all at once one day,
this tremendous ability and skill
that I could talk to fruit. Well,
not talk to them in their language, just
listen. I understood their native tongue but
never developed the know-how
to speak it - it was much too complex.
Thank goodness they understood
English, and knew much of the world.
Jill asked me how my day went when
I walked in the room one evening, unloosening
my tie and un-tucking my shirt. "Over with,"
I said, kissing her cheek.
My good friend, Banana was sitting in the
fruit bowl, muttering about how he's
annoyed Apple keeps talking about
the pesticides that are polluting th
He said, I bet if
I ate fireflies,
I'd light up something
wonderful and special
and then I'd be the perfect
man you'd always want.
She grimaced, said to
stop reading Alice in
Wonderland, to stop
being such a dreamer,
stop talking in abstract
ideas and nonsensical prose.
It's. Not. Healthy.
---
He hand wrote a little
chapbook for her, poems
and thoughts, his deepest.
Pricked his finger,watching in
fascination as the sanguine
liquid dripped, splatter small
in the corner of the cover page.
She would always have a piece
of his heart near-by.
He found it abused and dogeared
through use of neglect in corners
Do not love me if you wouldst be untrue
and love me falsly do not I pray you.
If thou would be false in your love for me
unrequited I wish my love shall be.
But if your pledges to me are not mist
I give to thee my rose, which crystal kiss'd.
A Critical Essay Concerning... by bbd127, literature
Literature
A Critical Essay Concerning...
A Critical Essay Concerning Itself
(In Seven Parts)
Part I: Overview
The primary subject of A Critical Essay Concerning Itself (hereafter called simply Essay) is its own self-analysis; hence it is a deeply introspective work, and it is in this light that we must consider it. Indeed, some might argue that Essay is concerned with nothing else, though deeper inspection reveals this is not quite true. (Consider, for example, the section on Critical Reaction, which deals with a response to the essay rather than the essay itself. That these two constitute the same text should not be held against the author.)
How, then, shall we approach a work
we are like cats because we chase shadows
cats, when we sit still and listen
to what the air reveals:
once, we were forest creatures
once, we climbed trees
sometimes we'll feel the bark in our fingernails
and we scratch
sometimes we'll wake up feeling
a rear ghost limb.
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I still want to sing. I'm still saying, in my next lifetime.
Just an update. More of a downdate. Or a middledate.
ring.
your past is calling.
hang up the phone.
I hate my writing. You know what I lack? I lack style. Completely. Why am I such a sporadic case? I just want to have a concrete something. Not this chaotic rain of trash that's just falling all the time from every direction that doesn't make any sense. Soppy wet trash. That's how it comes along. I can't find anything in it. Nothing to build from it. Why do I bother? Aside from avoiding the real world. Hmph.
Just thought I'd drop in to apologize for being ridiculously neglectful!! So after school I thought I'd have tons of time to critique, but it turns out I've selfishly managed to fill my time with other activities. None of which are very creative. It's not even like I work a lot (I need a second job desperately). I don't know how this happened. It's like suddenly months go by and you're like "Whoa, where did they go?" Therefore, my plot is that today after work I will come home and start critiquing. And then even write back to my pen pals! Who I have also been neglecting. How does this all happen? I haven't even written anything. I get ideas a
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capitals scare me. along with even numbers. but i'm suddenly willing to face my fears and figure out why we capitalize the letter "i." that is a wonderful question. i've never considered it.